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Spring haiku

Posted: Fri Mar 03, 2017 7:25 pm
by Stella
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Tiny blue thimbles
in England’s shady woodland
carpets of colour.


In pretty bouquets
‘neath boughs of ancient oak trees
sweet violets scent.


First to awaken
peeking through green coverlets
sleepy white snowdrops


(c) Stella Armour 2016/7

Re: Spring haiku

Posted: Sun Mar 05, 2017 4:18 pm
by Cindy
I loved the beautiful images you painted here. Feels fresh, just like spring.

Re: Spring haiku

Posted: Tue Mar 07, 2017 11:50 pm
by Seema Chowdhury
Lovely and colourful!

Re: Spring haiku

Posted: Thu Mar 09, 2017 4:36 am
by Karin Anderson
Such beautiful spring haiku and the colour of your picture and poem is a treat to see and read, as you paint the colour in in my most receptive mind Stella!

Re: Spring haiku

Posted: Mon Mar 20, 2017 1:54 am
by ShelleyA
Simply beautiful. A skillfully crafted traditional haiku string. Perfect 5/7/5 syllabic form. Vivid imagery and descriptives. You paint a picture of springtime that any reader can appreciate and see in their mind's eye. Lovely depth of feeling. Good word choice. Well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.

Re: Spring haiku

Posted: Thu Mar 23, 2017 9:49 pm
by Seema Chowdhury
This is so creative and lovely.