Garden Bliss

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Garden Bliss

Postby Stella » Sun Apr 09, 2017 2:40 pm


She didn’t just dance or sway
she actually twisted herself
from side to side in
sensual pleasure
as the wind teased and
tantalized all the way
through her ecstatic body
whilst the little saplings
watched giggling
from behind the
garden fence.

© Stella Armour April 9th 2017

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Re: Garden Bliss

Postby Sandra Martyres » Fri Apr 14, 2017 8:14 pm

The chosen picture complements your poem so well. You personify the tree with finesse!

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Re: Garden Bliss

Postby Karin Anderson » Sat Apr 15, 2017 9:58 am

The picture is amazing and I agree with Sandra you have crafted your poem with finesse Stella. I can just imagine the little saplings giggling from behind the fence too!

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Re: Garden Bliss

Postby Seema Chowdhury » Sat May 06, 2017 2:57 pm

Wow! nice photo to complement your creative words.

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