The terrible twins

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Sandra Martyres
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The terrible twins

Postby Sandra Martyres » Fri Apr 14, 2017 8:10 pm

Toxicity and negativity,
These emotions kill sensitivity,
Leading oftentimes to depravity,
And leave dark traces for posterity.

Nurturing them systematically,
Could stop you from acting rationally.
Abandon these twins immediately,
And resist their influence carefully.

You will change your life dramatically,
Your views will be taken seriously.
Your impact will grow exponentially,
And you will realise your dreams quickly.

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Stella
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Re: The terrible twins

Postby Stella » Sat Apr 15, 2017 10:50 am

Such true words Sandra, and they are Terrible Twins indeed that need to be stopped in their tracks.

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Karin Anderson
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Re: The terrible twins

Postby Karin Anderson » Sat Apr 15, 2017 12:41 pm

A most profound write and it has been crafted in monorhyme too! I am so pleased you posted another poem thank you Sandra!

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Seema Chowdhury
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Re: The terrible twins

Postby Seema Chowdhury » Sat May 06, 2017 2:56 pm

Nice and interesting choice of words Sandra, Nice to have you here , take care

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Cindy
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Re: The terrible twins

Postby Cindy » Mon May 08, 2017 10:46 pm

This is so very true. I love how you personify the emotions by calling them twins.


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