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The terrible twins

Posted: Fri Apr 14, 2017 8:10 pm
by Sandra Martyres
Toxicity and negativity,
These emotions kill sensitivity,
Leading oftentimes to depravity,
And leave dark traces for posterity.

Nurturing them systematically,
Could stop you from acting rationally.
Abandon these twins immediately,
And resist their influence carefully.

You will change your life dramatically,
Your views will be taken seriously.
Your impact will grow exponentially,
And you will realise your dreams quickly.

Re: The terrible twins

Posted: Sat Apr 15, 2017 10:50 am
by Stella
Such true words Sandra, and they are Terrible Twins indeed that need to be stopped in their tracks.

Re: The terrible twins

Posted: Sat Apr 15, 2017 12:41 pm
by Karin Anderson
A most profound write and it has been crafted in monorhyme too! I am so pleased you posted another poem thank you Sandra!

Re: The terrible twins

Posted: Sat May 06, 2017 2:56 pm
by Seema Chowdhury
Nice and interesting choice of words Sandra, Nice to have you here , take care

Re: The terrible twins

Posted: Mon May 08, 2017 10:46 pm
by Cindy
This is so very true. I love how you personify the emotions by calling them twins.