Day's Edge.

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Fay Slimm
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Day's Edge.

Postby Fay Slimm » Mon Nov 17, 2014 10:41 pm

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Stars like sparks splutter to bed
as birds catch fire.
Smut-red lips of sultry sun kiss
mouldering night
and in dawn's shimmering light
greet lightening sky.
Throat of thrush flintily strikes
other minds as incite
to fly for edge of day's eye sets
alive morning's
explosions which electrify all
tongues in flight
while I amazed hear the calls
of each feathered
awaker who knows the time
has arrived to feed
if for today they are to thrive.

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Stella
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Re: Day's Edge.

Postby Stella » Tue Nov 18, 2014 11:14 pm

I love the picture that you have chosen Fay to accompany you morning poem song, i see "dawn's shimmering light", and what a special few moments in which it appears.

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Karin Anderson
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Re: Day's Edge.

Postby Karin Anderson » Wed Nov 19, 2014 11:54 am

Wow! The colours and vivid imagery are magical. I am captivated from the first word to the last, when reality sets in and the birds need to feed. You never cease to amaze me as to how you interpret nature Fay.


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