So What?

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Nishu
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So What?

Postby Nishu » Tue Nov 18, 2014 1:32 pm

So what if the path isn't clear 
and there are boulders on the road 
So what if stars have broken 
and fallen on a stone 
The sun will still shine 
the birds soar and fly 
And I, being I ,will clear the way 
And put the stars back in the sky

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Fay Slimm
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Re: So What?

Postby Fay Slimm » Tue Nov 18, 2014 5:11 pm

I love the power in this short assertion of self-respect. A delightfully inspiring read Nishu

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Stella
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Re: So What?

Postby Stella » Tue Nov 18, 2014 11:04 pm

This shows your beautiful personality Nishu, never mind what has happened ..it can be mended and i will mend it.

A great sense of inner strength here my friend..

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Karin Anderson
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Re: So What?

Postby Karin Anderson » Wed Nov 19, 2014 9:50 am

Such an uplifting write and the positivity of putting the stars back in the sky really did it for me, thank you Nishu.

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Joseph Anderson
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Re: So What?

Postby Joseph Anderson » Thu Jan 08, 2015 8:05 pm

l love your positive attitude.Very unplifting, cheerful and a inspiring way of facing life Brief,but beautiful-loved it.

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Re: So What?

Postby Nightmute » Fri Jan 09, 2015 5:49 pm

Erosion happens and ways become cluttered, Nishu...but that is never an excuse to abandon hope and heart whilst we still have the strength in our bodies and bones to draw breath and celebrate Life, truly, Ma'am. This is an uplifting and magnificent write, Nishu.


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