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Absence (A Mirror Oddquain)
Posted: Wed Nov 19, 2014 6:34 am
by Karin Anderson
(Photo Garden Child by cutiepie06 flickr)
Child
your absence
blow-dries Spring's fragrance.
Ice dew from china petals
cracks~
Home
dew melts, melds warm rose essence
buds burst everywhere
garden-sprite
child~
Karin Anderson © 2014
Re: Absence (A Mirror Oddquain)
Posted: Wed Nov 19, 2014 11:46 am
by Fay Slimm
A dream of a read Karin dear friend - your garden child poem shines with delightful lines - - pure sweet-smelling vision of magic. Thank you for sharing it.
Re: Absence (A Mirror Oddquain)
Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2014 1:55 am
by Sandra Martyres
You have conquered a rather difficult form in this beautifully crafted poem Karin.
Re: Absence (A Mirror Oddquain)
Posted: Mon Oct 10, 2016 6:07 pm
by Stella
How wonderfully you have put these lines together Karin, the absent child brings sadness but then the mirror reflects springtime and there she is in the garden...
A difficult form to use but you have turned his poem into a wonderful mirrored imaged....
Re: Absence (A Mirror Oddquain)
Posted: Mon Oct 10, 2016 7:08 pm
by Adette
How delightful this poem it speaks volumes in so few words and the picture image is just so cute
the beauty and tranquility of a child is quite breathtaking - loved it