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Modern haiku - prompt Wedding
Posted: Thu Nov 27, 2014 11:57 pm
by Sandra Martyres
almond icing at last -
bride's mother hugs
the matchmaker
mass weddings -
the wrong bride appears
at his side
wedding reception -
gatecrashers outnumber
The guests
Re: Modern haiku - prompt Wedding
Posted: Fri Nov 28, 2014 9:42 am
by Karin Anderson
It is amazing how so few words create my very own pictures in my mind and I really like the humor Sandra. Some weddings do have their problems and I can imagine the confusion in the second and third haiku. The third one has only six words and the chaos it evokes is side splitting. You are a true haiku/senryu artist Sandra.
Re: Modern haiku - prompt Wedding
Posted: Fri Nov 28, 2014 3:59 pm
by Stella
Wonderfully done Sandra, and with such great humour too....
Re: Modern haiku - prompt Wedding
Posted: Sat Nov 29, 2014 3:13 pm
by Noodlehead1997
Haha, I love this! Love the way you structured the poem.
Re: Modern haiku - prompt Wedding
Posted: Sat Nov 29, 2014 6:13 pm
by Tom Balch
Love these three Haiku pieces, Sandra.