Modern haiku - prompt Wedding

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Sandra Martyres
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Modern haiku - prompt Wedding

Postby Sandra Martyres » Thu Nov 27, 2014 11:57 pm

almond icing at last -
bride's mother hugs
the matchmaker


mass weddings -
the wrong bride appears
at his side


wedding reception -
gatecrashers outnumber
The guests

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Karin Anderson
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Re: Modern haiku - prompt Wedding

Postby Karin Anderson » Fri Nov 28, 2014 9:42 am

It is amazing how so few words create my very own pictures in my mind and I really like the humor Sandra. Some weddings do have their problems and I can imagine the confusion in the second and third haiku. The third one has only six words and the chaos it evokes is side splitting. You are a true haiku/senryu artist Sandra.

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Stella
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Re: Modern haiku - prompt Wedding

Postby Stella » Fri Nov 28, 2014 3:59 pm

Wonderfully done Sandra, and with such great humour too....

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Noodlehead1997
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Re: Modern haiku - prompt Wedding

Postby Noodlehead1997 » Sat Nov 29, 2014 3:13 pm

Haha, I love this! Love the way you structured the poem.

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Tom Balch
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Re: Modern haiku - prompt Wedding

Postby Tom Balch » Sat Nov 29, 2014 6:13 pm

Love these three Haiku pieces, Sandra.


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