Shall We ?

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Fay Slimm
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Shall We ?

Postby Fay Slimm » Mon Dec 01, 2014 2:11 pm

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Shall we pluck intensity from the air and coil
it into ethereal letters
with sheets of white canvas where awaits our
love-ballads or fiery laments
with Museful meaning and sharpened pen ?

Shall we take poetic flight, you and I ?

Untried dimensions wait to take us to good
morning metaphors,
as we catch sight of food's verbose plate so
designed for bards who
delight in causing a stir at wordy breakfast.

Let us capture euphoria's feel and write of
glorious rapture today,
let loose untamed passion at first embrace
with the Muse then
pen with the ecstasy our hearts will taste.

Shall we wed word to page you and I ?

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Stella
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Re: Shall We ?

Postby Stella » Mon Dec 01, 2014 2:38 pm

Shall we indeed Fay my friend, I want to take flight today and pluck those ethereal letters from the sky, I just love your wonderful imagination, alliteration and the poetic journey of your muse.... Fantastic poetry. :D

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denysruak
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Re: Shall We ?

Postby denysruak » Tue Dec 02, 2014 6:07 pm

.... and why not indeed! There's something deeply satisfying in penning a good story in verse. Nicely crafted.

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Sandra Martyres
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Re: Shall We ?

Postby Sandra Martyres » Wed Dec 03, 2014 5:47 am

Wow Fay, I loved this imaginative piece.. Some unforgettable phrases like .. Causing a stir at wordy breakfast & pluck intensity from the air. This is poetry at its best!

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Karin Anderson
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Re: Shall We ?

Postby Karin Anderson » Thu Dec 04, 2014 5:11 am

Passionate and glorious penning which takes me to another place with stunning imagery and the photo sets a breathtaking scene. The answer is YES because who could resist such a wonderful invitation Fay?

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Joseph Anderson
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Re: Shall We ?

Postby Joseph Anderson » Mon Dec 29, 2014 11:25 pm

You will and do it extremely well.The proof is right before me.Pardon please, while I wallow with my envy.This is a splendid andsoaring write

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Sandra Martyres
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Re: Shall We ?

Postby Sandra Martyres » Tue Dec 30, 2014 2:49 am

Loved this imaginative write Fay and the illustration chosen could not have been better.. Seriously this is one of your best..loved it! :D


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