Last Night Home Tomorrow

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Tom Balch
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Last Night Home Tomorrow

Postby Tom Balch » Tue Dec 02, 2014 6:03 pm

The evening shadows lengthen
as the sun sinks to the sea,
rolling wave’s across the bay
glisten red for you and me.

The sand still warm beneath us
palms sway softly in the breeze,
this perfect summer paradise
is impossible to leave.

But leave we must it’s over
others now will watch with glee
the evening shadows lengthen
and the sun sink to the sea.

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Stella
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Re: Last Night Home Tomorrow

Postby Stella » Tue Dec 02, 2014 8:46 pm

A last lovely evening in a beautifully romantic setting,and tomorrow two more loving hearts will probably watch the sun set over the sea and like you take home wonderful memories .Lovely images in this poem Tom..

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Noodlehead1997
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Re: Last Night Home Tomorrow

Postby Noodlehead1997 » Tue Dec 02, 2014 10:57 pm

This is so romantic Tom. I loved this one, gorgeous imagery and wording... I am in love, with a poem!:D

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Sandra Martyres
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Re: Last Night Home Tomorrow

Postby Sandra Martyres » Wed Dec 03, 2014 4:30 am

Loved this romantic write Tom... The imagerycreated is hard to beat.. Beatiful penning.

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Re: Last Night Home Tomorrow

Postby Fay Slimm » Thu Dec 04, 2014 1:16 pm

This one got me near tears with its beguiling appeal Tom - a lovely read.

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Re: Last Night Home Tomorrow

Postby Noodlehead1997 » Thu Dec 04, 2014 2:05 pm

I just love this one! The imagery is so vivid you can picture everything, it is simply divine -- loving the imagery, by the way! :D

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Re: Last Night Home Tomorrow

Postby Cindy » Sun Dec 07, 2014 5:38 am

Time flys when you're having fun, as they say. This is a lovely poem.

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Re: Last Night Home Tomorrow

Postby Joseph Anderson » Sun Dec 28, 2014 11:09 pm

Tom-a real gem of poetic expression that has me dreading our l,ong winters.Done very well and a sadly joyful read

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Re: Last Night Home Tomorrow

Postby apoetwholovestosing » Wed Dec 31, 2014 12:24 am

Yes, home tomorrow with such wonderful memories. You have painted with words, a lovely portrait where love has struck and unforgettable pose.
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Re: Last Night Home Tomorrow

Postby Karin Anderson » Wed Dec 31, 2014 4:24 am

I can see why others have enjoyed this picturesque write and I love it too. I am drawn in to its romantic images so wonderfully Tom...

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Re: Last Night Home Tomorrow

Postby antoine » Thu Feb 19, 2015 8:48 pm

Been there so often Tom - that 'wow! is the holiday over already feeling' and trying to soak in as much of the place as possible n the last remaining hours. You penned it wonderfully here; capturing the longing and the sadness and also the thankfulness for being able to experience it and being a teensy bit jealous of those who have just arrived or who are staying for at least another day. Class poem!


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