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Black Mascara Tears
Posted: Tue Dec 02, 2014 10:53 pm
by Noodlehead1997
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Who knew, I would cry for you
You swept me off my feet,
And stole my heart.
Who knew, I would die for you
You made up fantasises
Lied about our future.
Who knew I would mourn you
After the lies where just stories.
Who knew, my eyes would cry
Black Mascara Tears
Re: Black Mascara Tears
Posted: Wed Dec 03, 2014 4:33 am
by Sandra Martyres
A touching write... Liked the black mascara tears
Re: Black Mascara Tears
Posted: Wed Dec 03, 2014 4:03 pm
by Stella
Wonderful closing couplet Sye, and great picture too...
Re: Black Mascara Tears
Posted: Sat Dec 06, 2014 2:35 pm
by Cindy
So very sad, but wonderfully written.
Re: Black Mascara Tears
Posted: Sat Dec 06, 2014 10:28 pm
by Fay Slimm
I feel every line in this well-crafted verse of regret for lost trust when love hurts enough to produce mascara -tears. An exceptional piece Sye and thank you for sharing it.
Re: Black Mascara Tears
Posted: Thu Jan 08, 2015 6:56 pm
by Joseph Anderson
You write extremely well for such a young age.This was so sad and poignant.You got it said with great brevity and said so well
Re: Black Mascara Tears
Posted: Thu Jan 22, 2015 1:52 pm
by Tom Balch
The sadness in this well penned piece shines in every line, NH.