Apart ~ Fibonacci

[Stella]

Warm
night
breezes
soft whisper
their sensuous songs
to awaken in ecstasy
those sleeping lovers who dream a thousand miles apart


© Stella Armour 2014

[Karin Anderson]

Fibonacci poems are certainly your forte Stella, and this gem has great alliteration and a subject which is so creatively displayed again. The last line is stretched with distance and the picture highlights distance as well. It is such a treat visiting this site thank you Stella!

[Adette]

wow roses bending to kiss each others buds so delicate and refreshing - like the bloom of youth when capturing it first kiss - love the way you have portrayed the lines.