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Apart ~ Fibonacci
Posted: Wed Dec 03, 2014 8:50 pm
by Stella
Warm
night
breezes
soft whisper
their sensuous songs
to awaken in ecstasy
those sleeping lovers who dream a thousand miles apart
© Stella Armour 2014
Re: Apart ~ Fibonacci
Posted: Thu Dec 04, 2014 5:32 am
by Karin Anderson
Fibonacci poems are certainly your forte Stella, and this gem has great alliteration and a subject which is so creatively displayed again. The last line is stretched with distance and the picture highlights distance as well. It is such a treat visiting this site thank you Stella!
Re: Apart ~ Fibonacci
Posted: Mon Oct 10, 2016 7:12 pm
by Adette
wow roses bending to kiss each others buds so delicate and refreshing - like the bloom of youth when capturing it first kiss - love the way you have portrayed the lines.