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A Chill in the Air

Posted: Sun Dec 07, 2014 2:02 pm
by Stella


There’s a chill in the air this evening
afternoon rain hangs where it froze,
above me the North Star is shining,
beneath, Jack Frost nips at my toes.

The trees look haunted and ghostly,
draped in shrouds of lily white;
their death sleep is only transient
inside the grasp of this winter night.

There’s a hush in the air this evening,
ne’er a whisper, not even a breeze;
a December night waits in suspension,
held in time, entombed by a freeze.

The crystalline air sparkles brightly,
before a fine flurry begins to fall;
then, the mystic stillness is broken,
as Christmas snowflakes soften all.

©Stella Armour 2012-12-15
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Re: A Chill in the Air

Posted: Sun Dec 07, 2014 5:52 pm
by Sandra Martyres
I love the soft ending to this lovely piece on the December chilly air..

Re: A Chill in the Air

Posted: Sun Dec 07, 2014 7:33 pm
by Fay Slimm
Simply beautiful the gentle words and the number you chose Stella - a pleasure to read and thanks for sharing.

Re: A Chill in the Air

Posted: Tue Dec 09, 2014 11:45 am
by Karin Anderson
Beautifully and hauntingly atmospheric and I admire the alliteration of "before a fine flurry begins to fall" and "held in time entombed by a freeze" really stood out for me thank you Stella.

Re: A Chill in the Air

Posted: Tue Dec 09, 2014 12:49 pm
by Noodlehead1997
Enya is amazing... I so love her, this songs goes perfectly well with your poem, this is a gem.