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Outside of Time.
Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2014 7:03 am
by Fay Slimm
Pasts were forgotten,
no more were they strangers
to each other, yet
unknown now to themselves.
They stood in awe
of what they knew had begun,
now outside of time
they learnt nothing but new.
Senses felt numb
until they realized kind fate
meant to open love's
tollgate so they became one.
Beyond time's fixed
boundary begins destiny's
chance for romance
and there two lovers waited
for fresh reality.
Re: Outside of Time.
Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2014 7:57 am
by Sandra Martyres
A romantic write with a difference ... Very creative and imaginative Fay..
Re: Outside of Time.
Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2014 9:20 pm
by Stella
How wonderful for them both, strangers brought together by fate..
Lovely romance Fay, you pen it beautifully.
Re: Outside of Time.
Posted: Sun Dec 28, 2014 7:01 pm
by Joseph Anderson
Fay-Poetry is nothing more then concentrated prose. This you have so aptly proven,with a great brevity where every word is important.A real beauty by any
standard.Touchingly memorable
Re: Outside of Time.
Posted: Sun Dec 28, 2014 7:38 pm
by apoetwholovestosing
Teases my senses! A well structured verse, leaves me reeling as time is mentor, tormentor with love on a merry-go-round!
Dorothy
Re: Outside of Time.
Posted: Fri Jan 02, 2015 2:21 pm
by patspoems
Lovely poetry, as always, Fay. Loved the graphic too....Pat