Outside of Time.

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Fay Slimm
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Outside of Time.

Postby Fay Slimm » Wed Dec 10, 2014 7:03 am

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Pasts were forgotten,
no more were they strangers
to each other, yet
unknown now to themselves.
They stood in awe
of what they knew had begun,
now outside of time
they learnt nothing but new.
Senses felt numb
until they realized kind fate
meant to open love's
tollgate so they became one.
Beyond time's fixed
boundary begins destiny's
chance for romance
and there two lovers waited
for fresh reality.

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Sandra Martyres
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Re: Outside of Time.

Postby Sandra Martyres » Wed Dec 10, 2014 7:57 am

A romantic write with a difference ... Very creative and imaginative Fay..

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Stella
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Re: Outside of Time.

Postby Stella » Wed Dec 10, 2014 9:20 pm

How wonderful for them both, strangers brought together by fate..

Lovely romance Fay, you pen it beautifully.

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Joseph Anderson
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Re: Outside of Time.

Postby Joseph Anderson » Sun Dec 28, 2014 7:01 pm

Fay-Poetry is nothing more then concentrated prose. This you have so aptly proven,with a great brevity where every word is important.A real beauty by any
standard.Touchingly memorable

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apoetwholovestosing
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Re: Outside of Time.

Postby apoetwholovestosing » Sun Dec 28, 2014 7:38 pm

Teases my senses! A well structured verse, leaves me reeling as time is mentor, tormentor with love on a merry-go-round!
Dorothy

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patspoems
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Re: Outside of Time.

Postby patspoems » Fri Jan 02, 2015 2:21 pm

Lovely poetry, as always, Fay. Loved the graphic too....Pat


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