Page 1 of 1
Performing.
Posted: Sat Dec 27, 2014 11:13 pm
by Fay Slimm
As morning trembles on the edge of time we
sit on bent grass and wind-dried heather
tracing the coming of dawn.
Like eyes each disc of light assails in-coming
shoreline to scatter shadows in wavelets
as a high tide approaches.
Pulsates now with power to burst forth in
fleeting showers of diamanté shine it bows
to beauty's glorious Source.
I meanwhile find my mind's memory filled
with awe and wish for everyone living this
humbling cliff-top experience.
We all applaud the day's colourful display
of unbroken performance as light's palest
first rays welcome the sun.
Re: Performing.
Posted: Sun Dec 28, 2014 11:12 am
by Stella
Dawn is such a mystical time of day , and your imagery is amazing as always Fay.
The opening lines are beautiful..
Re: Performing.
Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2015 8:32 pm
by Joseph Anderson
The whole poem is beautiful.No one can describe nature at its best like you.Ethereal,heaven sent beauty.Visions to remember
Re: Performing.
Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2015 8:52 pm
by denysruak
Fay, your understanding and writing of those little happenings in nature are a joy to behold which makes one appreciate the nuances one is apt to miss when not paying enough attention. I thank you for this.
Re: Performing.
Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2015 11:39 pm
by Cindy
I love your description of such a beautiful moment. And so it is also a beautiful poem.
Re: Performing.
Posted: Fri Jan 16, 2015 4:23 am
by Karin Anderson
What a stunning cliff top experience this is Fay and I applaud you for your poetic interpretation. Your gift has been granted as you allowed me to live my experience through your wonderful images.