Heartbeats….

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Stella
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Heartbeats….

Postby Stella » Mon Dec 29, 2014 8:11 pm

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Your heart beats now
only within the pulse of mine,
as you live gently within me
and although your words are silent
I hear you in the voice of my soul.

‘Tis I alone who must tend
the eternal garden of our love,
keeping alive the blossoms
that kissed our days so tenderly.

Savouring in remembrance
the seasons in which we grew,
the freshness of each new dawn
and warmth of each sensuous night.

Keeping you close even now is
like pressing beautiful flowers
between the treasured pages
in my book of memories.


© Stella Armour April 2014

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Re: Heartbeats….

Postby Joseph Anderson » Mon Dec 29, 2014 9:30 pm

Stella-This has to be as good as a poem of love and remembrance could ever be.The eternal garden of our love is beautiful in metaphoric
imagery.This is the way I would wish to write.Superb-5 star

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Re: Heartbeats….

Postby Sandra Martyres » Tue Dec 30, 2014 2:55 am

Triple AAA... For this beautiful nostalgic write Stella.. A memorable write

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Re: Heartbeats….

Postby Nishu » Tue Dec 30, 2014 6:58 am

Wistful, pensive and simply beautiful dear Stella. A lovely, lovely read.

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Re: Heartbeats….

Postby Nightmute » Tue Dec 30, 2014 5:22 pm

A stunningly beautiful write that contains such heart, Stella. Remembrances need not always be mournful things, for we certainly have memories of such uplifting joy that keep us going. A heart felt write this is, Ma'am.

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Re: Heartbeats….

Postby Seema Chowdhury » Tue Dec 30, 2014 5:24 pm

this is such a beautiful and a tender write. Happy and blessed new year dear friend.

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Re: Heartbeats….

Postby Karin Anderson » Wed Dec 31, 2014 4:49 am

A glorious write with superb imagery such as the eternal garden, blossoms and pressing flowers . Remembrance is lovingly portrayed with your golden pen Stella.

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Re: Heartbeats….

Postby apoetwholovestosing » Thu Jan 01, 2015 2:31 pm

A beautiful verse! So warmly and elegantly expressed!

Dorothy
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