COME LIGHT - - by Fay Slimm.

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COME LIGHT - - by Fay Slimm.

Postby Fay Slimm » Fri Oct 24, 2014 1:37 pm

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Come Light.

There are times when the sea
is not a blue ocean,
nor even water
but some violent explosion
which can only be summoned by Gods
for, when bursting with
over-keen energy
it wells then hurls itself over the rocks,
biting great pieces off cliffs
like some ravenous
beast whose rage knows no limits,
it's roar never stops.
A deafening storm frights those inside
exposed cottages
who experience disorder of senses
enough for them to hide
when froth hits the chimney tops,
as until more quiet arrives
the night heaves
with zealous wind-demons cavorting
in lace-caps, sandy-socks,
grit-filled ribbons
and the saltiest long seaweed frocks.
Pray that, come light,
the worst of an almighty gale
is blown out,
to reveal no tragic cost and a new day,
in restoring order again,
shows not a boat or fisherman lost.

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Re: COME LIGHT - - by Fay Slimm.

Postby Lynda Robson » Fri Oct 24, 2014 3:09 pm

We should always respect the powerful sea, a brilliant write Fay,

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Re: COME LIGHT - - by Fay Slimm.

Postby Fay Slimm » Fri Oct 24, 2014 3:11 pm

Thank you Lynda for your perceptive comment. So nice to see you on this exciting new site. Am still trying to find my way around but worked out today how to post poems - - I think !!!

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Re: COME LIGHT - - by Fay Slimm.

Postby Stella » Fri Oct 24, 2014 3:24 pm

Fay, this is a beautiful poem with all its wonderful descriptive images, the sea is her own master as we see from your poem.

May i also say well done for managing to navigate this new site of ours, it is a pleasure to see how well you have presented your first write.. :)

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Re: COME LIGHT - - by Fay Slimm.

Postby Fay Slimm » Thu Oct 30, 2014 2:28 pm

Ah - how good to see you here David - a lovely friendly site and one which we can trust holds nothing but welcome. I look forward to reading some of you work here my friend and a big Welcome indeed.......... from Fay

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Re: COME LIGHT - - by Fay Slimm.

Postby Nishu » Thu Oct 30, 2014 3:19 pm

This was wonderful to read Fay, so vividly and intensely written. I lived very close to the ocean once upon a time and I know the fury the sea is capable of . Lovely poetry x

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Re: COME LIGHT - - by Fay Slimm.

Postby Fay Slimm » Thu Oct 30, 2014 5:38 pm

Hi Nishu - - So good to know you enjoyed the poem called Come Light and that you have experienced living alongside the sea. It has always mesmerized me and I have written about its power so often. Thank you for your lovely comment and pleased to see you here on this lovely new site.

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Re: COME LIGHT - - by Fay Slimm.

Postby Cindy » Sat Nov 08, 2014 12:23 am

A very wonderful description of a raging sea. A very fascinating and awesome thing to witness too. I have seen the power of a great body of water. Great poem.

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Re: COME LIGHT - - by Fay Slimm.

Postby Fay Slimm » Sat Nov 08, 2014 8:12 am

Thank you Cindy for visiting and reading my poem about the sudden changes at sea - so pleased you found something of value within the verse. Delighted that you have joined this friendly site Cindy and look forward to reading your work here.

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Re: COME LIGHT - - by Fay Slimm.

Postby Seema Chowdhury » Sat Feb 07, 2015 10:01 pm

Hi Fay, it is always such a delight to read your words, they spread happiness and delight.

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Re: COME LIGHT - - by Fay Slimm.

Postby apoetwholovestosing » Sun Feb 08, 2015 5:13 am

Always, there is excellence in your writing. This is a beautiful verse. A most enjoyable read!
Dorothy
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Re: COME LIGHT - - by Fay Slimm.

Postby Tom Balch » Sun Feb 08, 2015 9:59 am

The power of the sea hits hard in this brilliant piece, Fay.

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Re: COME LIGHT - - by Fay Slimm.

Postby drllrd74 » Mon Sep 07, 2015 6:04 pm

Strong write Fay. Good to see you here.


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