Oops and his Tootsies

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denysruak
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Oops and his Tootsies

Postby denysruak » Tue Dec 30, 2014 2:54 pm

Oops and his Tootsies

PutOn the Shoes and Tie the Laces
are wearing sad little faces
because Oops, out for a lark,
is playing barefoot in the park.
They are missing (the company of) his ten little toes,
five on each foot - as everybody knows.
Shall we count them? - you say when ....
one, two, three, four, five, six, seven, eight, nine, TEN!!
Yipee!!

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Nightmute
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Re: Oops and his Tootsies

Postby Nightmute » Tue Dec 30, 2014 4:53 pm

An infectiously joyful verse you've shared with us here, Denys. Get those two feet, and ten toes, out to the park and enjoy the day, my friend! :D

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Re: Oops and his Tootsies

Postby Stella » Tue Dec 30, 2014 6:04 pm

Denys, i start laughing even before i read the poems about Oops, this one is hilarious as usual..thank you

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Re: Oops and his Tootsies

Postby Karin Anderson » Wed Dec 31, 2014 4:39 am

A remarkable and comical write indeed Denys and you bring much joy to the site. I can't stop smiling especially with the last word being Yipee!!


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