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New Year Star Cascades
Posted: Wed Dec 31, 2014 6:46 am
by Karin Anderson
(A Diminished Hexaverse)
(picture flckr by Darkest Soul
As billowed curtains blew
wide, full-moon sapphire sea
shimmered on dusk's spring-tide,
where precious unstrung jewels
dangled star cascades and
spilled gold on sand-panned ground.
We found a cottage
when blood sunset creamed
sherry in our hearts,
as wind's moans streamed down
music of the spheres.
You brought morn's blush
on a tea tray
bergamot sweet
deep as dimples
Like you knew
last night’s lust
flared love as
New Year’s
starfish
BLAZED!
Re: New Year Star Cascades
Posted: Wed Dec 31, 2014 11:12 am
by Stella
Lovely to see this beautiful form being used so well Karin, and the imagery and colours really do cascade down the page wonderfully..
Happy New Year to you my friend... ♫
Re: New Year Star Cascades
Posted: Wed Dec 31, 2014 5:21 pm
by apoetwholovestosing
Karin, such a beautiful verse, in form and content...No one does it better. My early morning sunshine, thanks to you!
Dorothy
A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Re: New Year Star Cascades
Posted: Wed Dec 31, 2014 6:14 pm
by Nightmute
Oh, but how very sensual this poem is...it touches so many senses, bringing to life such an ecstatic feel, Karin. A true treasure of a write this is, Ma'am. May the New Year see you ever-so inspired and smiling, my friend.
Re: New Year Star Cascades
Posted: Fri Jan 02, 2015 5:14 am
by Karin Anderson
Thank you for your comments Stella, Dorothy and Nightmute and may all members have a happy, healthy and prosperous New Year.
Re: New Year Star Cascades
Posted: Sat Jan 03, 2015 7:46 pm
by Joseph Anderson
Unigue style,new to me, still beautful.Wow,you found a cottages with moaning winds and flaring lusts.What a great way to start rhe New Year.
In all seriousness this is a gem of beauty
Re: New Year Star Cascades
Posted: Sun Jan 04, 2015 6:17 pm
by Sandra Martyres
A complex format yet your words cascade down beautifully with delightful imagery... Happy New Year to you too Karin. Lookinf forward to reading more of your brilliant poetry.
Re: New Year Star Cascades
Posted: Mon Jan 05, 2015 6:04 am
by Nishu
Splendid poetry! Beautiful images and fascinating form.
Re: New Year Star Cascades
Posted: Wed Jan 14, 2015 5:13 am
by denysruak
And a Happy New Year to you, Karin. Thank you for this tumbling flow of words that's awash with imagery.
Re: New Year Star Cascades
Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2016 9:41 pm
by Adette
How inviting and I will have to read this again when New Year comes to England when its freezing cold and coloured white. What wonderfull expressions they seem to draw you into their beauty, love the picture yes the curtain blew open and invited the world to see beyond its depths a stunning poem with great imagination