Graciousness (Basic Pleiades Form)

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Nightmute
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Graciousness (Basic Pleiades Form)

Postby Nightmute » Wed Dec 31, 2014 6:42 pm

Glowing, how her cheek, refined,
grabs hold and reflects the light.
Grinning, she, knowing not of her
grace, majestic, yet shines she all the more.
Gorgeous, aye, her infectious joy,
gives unto all in view a warmth so
Godly-gained, my wife is ever-more so precious.

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Stella
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Re: Graciousness (Basic Pleiades Form)

Postby Stella » Wed Dec 31, 2014 7:14 pm

I really like this form Richard, and is wonderful to see different forms being used on our site.

The dedication to your lovely wife is heart-warming my friend..♫

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Karin Anderson
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Re: Graciousness (Basic Pleiades Form)

Postby Karin Anderson » Thu Jan 01, 2015 4:13 am

I have never tried a Pleiades Form, but after seeing this beautiful write for your treasured wife, I will certainly try. Using the same letter for the begging of the first word in the lines works a treat for you, and may you and your wife have a blessed New Year of bliss with one another and your family Richard.

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apoetwholovestosing
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Re: Graciousness (Basic Pleiades Form)

Postby apoetwholovestosing » Thu Jan 01, 2015 7:59 pm

Lovely in verse and form. It will be my new challenge to write this Basic Pleiades Form. Your words are beautiful and a fine tribute to your Lady Love!
Dorothy
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