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Will you still love me?

Posted: Fri Jan 02, 2015 11:17 am
by Nishu
Today I'm beautiful,
And I have you on your knees,
But when my beauty wanes,
Will you still love me?

Today I'm young,
And passion has her say,
But will you hold me close,
When crimson love grays?

Today I'm alive,
Like a strong summer gale,
But will you care for me,
When I be frail?

Today I smile,
There's laughter in my eyes,
But will you be with me,
When my heart cries?

Will you love me, hold me,
In love's tender kiss,
When my hair turns white,
And my thoughts go a miss?

Will you love me, hug me,
Ever so tight,
Through my brightest morn'..
In my darkest night?

Re: Will you still love me?

Posted: Fri Jan 02, 2015 12:09 pm
by Stella
This poem is oh, so beautifully penned from your heart Nishu.

If the answer be "yes" then you have found the one love of a lifetime...

Re: Will you still love me?

Posted: Fri Jan 02, 2015 5:14 pm
by apoetwholovestosing
A precious love deepens with time...the gray simply means you are wiser, rich with wisdom and with even being frail the strength it took to hold on to such a love, will not be forgotten. Your smile will be sweeter and remember your partner will have aged too and probably wondering the same questions. Ah, be at peace!
Dorothy

Re: Will you still love me?

Posted: Fri Jan 02, 2015 5:39 pm
by Nightmute
Such a query carries with it the essence of true love, Nishu. Aye, when youth reigns and vigor spills forth so triumphantly, it is easy to answer this query with a resounding, "Yes!". When we find ourselves on the waning side of years gone by, the answer takes on more importance and the criticality of the heart, when flaws begin to blossom, seeks such soothing knowledge. I believe that the years can be made to enhance the twining pair so that the answer, when gray is present and our shoulders begin to stoop, can still be a resounding and joyous, "Yes!", Ma'am. A deepness so delved, in Love, does not yield emptiness, methinks, but brings forth a burgeoning, glorious fullness and a beautiful detailing that can only be found when a couple experiences the passing years together. An altogether beautiful write, my friend.

Re: Will you still love me?

Posted: Sat Jan 03, 2015 6:56 pm
by Joseph Anderson
Well Nichu-if he dont love you, I bet he will still love your poetry. This is so tender and moving and hits me right in the heart.Dont worry, he will

Re: Will you still love me?

Posted: Sun Jan 04, 2015 3:20 pm
by Sandra Martyres
A touching write Nishu... Beautifully worded

Re: Will you still love me?

Posted: Mon Jan 05, 2015 9:39 am
by Karin Anderson
Yes is certainly the answer and how could he resist such a tender and special poem? A wonderful write and wonderful write Nishu...