Skylark ~ (alliterative fibonacci)

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Skylark ~ (alliterative fibonacci)

Postby Stella » Mon Jan 05, 2015 11:24 pm

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Soon
sweet
Skylark
sings softly,
shy summer sun swoons,
sighing, seduced sensually,
spilling sunshine, sating soulful shadows serenely.

©Stella Armour 2013-01-14

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Re: Skylark ~ (alliterative fibonacci)

Postby apoetwholovestosing » Tue Jan 06, 2015 2:45 am

How lovely Stella! A form I have not tried in this fashion...Wonderful, I say!
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Re: Skylark ~ (alliterative fibonacci)

Postby Sandra Martyres » Tue Jan 06, 2015 5:17 am

Just beautiful Stella...

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Re: Skylark ~ (alliterative fibonacci)

Postby Nightmute » Tue Jan 06, 2015 7:14 pm

Oh, I like that, Stella! Flawless in form, spectacular in imagery and conveyance, Ma'am. It will be nice to have Spring back with us, my friend, and the call and cry of many of our feathered friends to listen to.

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Re: Skylark ~ (alliterative fibonacci)

Postby Fay Slimm » Wed Jan 07, 2015 6:10 pm

A splendid form and you master it perfectly Stella. Brilliant alliteration too.

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Re: Skylark ~ (alliterative fibonacci)

Postby Nishu » Thu Jan 08, 2015 3:22 am

Beautiful and delightful Stella. Lovely poetry. :)

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Re: Skylark ~ (alliterative fibonacci)

Postby Karin Anderson » Thu Jan 08, 2015 7:04 am

I just love this Stella with the bird in the picture singing and it is alliteration at its very best. Not only is it alliteration but has the form a fibonacci as well. A beautiful write Stella with such lovely imagery to enjoy.


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