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Skylark ~ (alliterative fibonacci)

Posted: Mon Jan 05, 2015 11:24 pm
by Stella
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Soon
sweet
Skylark
sings softly,
shy summer sun swoons,
sighing, seduced sensually,
spilling sunshine, sating soulful shadows serenely.

©Stella Armour 2013-01-14

Re: Skylark ~ (alliterative fibonacci)

Posted: Tue Jan 06, 2015 2:45 am
by apoetwholovestosing
How lovely Stella! A form I have not tried in this fashion...Wonderful, I say!
Dorothy
APWLTS

Re: Skylark ~ (alliterative fibonacci)

Posted: Tue Jan 06, 2015 5:17 am
by Sandra Martyres
Just beautiful Stella...

Re: Skylark ~ (alliterative fibonacci)

Posted: Tue Jan 06, 2015 7:14 pm
by Nightmute
Oh, I like that, Stella! Flawless in form, spectacular in imagery and conveyance, Ma'am. It will be nice to have Spring back with us, my friend, and the call and cry of many of our feathered friends to listen to.

Re: Skylark ~ (alliterative fibonacci)

Posted: Wed Jan 07, 2015 6:10 pm
by Fay Slimm
A splendid form and you master it perfectly Stella. Brilliant alliteration too.

Re: Skylark ~ (alliterative fibonacci)

Posted: Thu Jan 08, 2015 3:22 am
by Nishu
Beautiful and delightful Stella. Lovely poetry. :)

Re: Skylark ~ (alliterative fibonacci)

Posted: Thu Jan 08, 2015 7:04 am
by Karin Anderson
I just love this Stella with the bird in the picture singing and it is alliteration at its very best. Not only is it alliteration but has the form a fibonacci as well. A beautiful write Stella with such lovely imagery to enjoy.