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Tranquility

Posted: Fri Jan 09, 2015 5:53 pm
by Nightmute
We walked hand-in-hand
over the dew-dropped grass,
the sun mounting the sky
like a proud warrior mounting his steed.
Our path took us to a shadowed, wooded valley
where the crickets still chirped
and this crevice in the crust of the Earth
held onto the night with the grip of a thousand men.
Here, in this synogogue of silence,
my thoughts poured out and flooded me.
In flashes I saw myself,
from childhood to my venerable days.
A smile rose across my lips
as I began to walk once more.
My friend offered me more than I could imagine.
We left the shaded valley, hand-in-hand,
just Death and I.

Re: Tranquility

Posted: Fri Jan 09, 2015 6:29 pm
by Stella
A glimpse of a new horizon, in a reverent, peaceful place as your "friend " journeyed with you on this last walk Richard, and you seemed so happy to be leaving..

Almost haunting, but so tranquil the moments were beautiful..

Re: Tranquility

Posted: Fri Jan 09, 2015 6:29 pm
by Joseph Anderson
Just walking hand in hand with your ever present mortality. This is a real poser, a real thought provoker,with some deep imagery.Unusual and
unique thinking for one so young