It was

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Wordsmith
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It was

Postby Wordsmith » Mon Jan 12, 2015 12:48 pm

It was on a Monday, that I was feeling low,
But it was on a Tuesday that I thought where should I go ?
Too soon it was Wednesday, and I finally ventured out.
Then it was a Thursday , that I decided to go out and about,
Whereas on Friday, a thought came to me,
So on Saturday, I went down to the beach and sea.
Next it was Sunday, and yet again I said,
I'll not get up today, but stay in bed instead !!

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Joseph Anderson
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Re: It was

Postby Joseph Anderson » Mon Jan 12, 2015 1:51 pm

I have lots of weeks similiar to this.Decisions are with us daily.A fun write,perhaps typical of many oldsters.Done well

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Re: It was

Postby Stella » Mon Jan 12, 2015 5:11 pm

I know the feeling..lol, but Saturday was interesting enough to last you until Monday again..

Good to see your first poem here Jan... Welcome!

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Re: It was

Postby Fay Slimm » Mon Jan 12, 2015 10:29 pm

Welcome to this friendly site Jan - - a well-crafted verse which tells the story of my week at times. Look forward to reading more of your posts.

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Re: It was

Postby apoetwholovestosing » Tue Jan 13, 2015 1:02 pm

Going back to bed is fine for sleeping but it is not good to escape there, hiding from the world. You will miss out on living when bed becomes a misguided friend. It is fine for afternoon naps to refresh your mind and write another fine poem.
Dorothy

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Re: It was

Postby Cindy » Tue Jan 13, 2015 2:05 pm

I am all too familiar with this scenario. Bed really can be your best friend at times. Nice poem.

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Wordsmith
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Re: It was

Postby Wordsmith » Wed Jan 14, 2015 5:07 pm

thanks everyone...it actually wasn't about me !!!

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Re: It was

Postby Nightmute » Wed Jan 14, 2015 5:11 pm

Sometimes we just need some time indoors, without the distractions that accost us when it is we venture out of doors. Let us not make a habit of it, though.

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Wordsmith
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Re: It was

Postby Wordsmith » Thu Jan 15, 2015 8:49 am

Know what you mean Nightmute

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Tom Balch
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Re: It was

Postby Tom Balch » Thu Jan 22, 2015 1:49 pm

What a week "It was", Much enjoyed.

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Re: It was

Postby Wordsmith » Thu Jan 22, 2015 5:08 pm

Thanks


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