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It was
Posted: Mon Jan 12, 2015 12:48 pm
by Wordsmith
It was on a Monday, that I was feeling low,
But it was on a Tuesday that I thought where should I go ?
Too soon it was Wednesday, and I finally ventured out.
Then it was a Thursday , that I decided to go out and about,
Whereas on Friday, a thought came to me,
So on Saturday, I went down to the beach and sea.
Next it was Sunday, and yet again I said,
I'll not get up today, but stay in bed instead !!
Re: It was
Posted: Mon Jan 12, 2015 1:51 pm
by Joseph Anderson
I have lots of weeks similiar to this.Decisions are with us daily.A fun write,perhaps typical of many oldsters.Done well
Re: It was
Posted: Mon Jan 12, 2015 5:11 pm
by Stella
I know the feeling..lol, but Saturday was interesting enough to last you until Monday again..
Good to see your first poem here Jan... Welcome!
Re: It was
Posted: Mon Jan 12, 2015 10:29 pm
by Fay Slimm
Welcome to this friendly site Jan - - a well-crafted verse which tells the story of my week at times. Look forward to reading more of your posts.
Re: It was
Posted: Tue Jan 13, 2015 1:02 pm
by apoetwholovestosing
Going back to bed is fine for sleeping but it is not good to escape there, hiding from the world. You will miss out on living when bed becomes a misguided friend. It is fine for afternoon naps to refresh your mind and write another fine poem.
Dorothy
Re: It was
Posted: Tue Jan 13, 2015 2:05 pm
by Cindy
I am all too familiar with this scenario. Bed really can be your best friend at times. Nice poem.
Re: It was
Posted: Wed Jan 14, 2015 5:07 pm
by Wordsmith
thanks everyone...it actually wasn't about me !!!
Re: It was
Posted: Wed Jan 14, 2015 5:11 pm
by Nightmute
Sometimes we just need some time indoors, without the distractions that accost us when it is we venture out of doors. Let us not make a habit of it, though.
Re: It was
Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2015 8:49 am
by Wordsmith
Know what you mean Nightmute
Re: It was
Posted: Thu Jan 22, 2015 1:49 pm
by Tom Balch
What a week "It was", Much enjoyed.
Re: It was
Posted: Thu Jan 22, 2015 5:08 pm
by Wordsmith
Thanks