Painting By Moonlight

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apoetwholovestosing
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Painting By Moonlight

Postby apoetwholovestosing » Tue Jan 13, 2015 12:47 pm

As if blindfolded
first I paint your eyes
highlighting the sparkle
radiating the truth your
love speaks.

Then the curve of your nose
that flares when you laugh.
Your mouth is full and rich
so I linger here to portray
their rich smile.

Moonlight becomes a halo
to enhance the wonder of you
as I lay to rest in the curve
of your strong arms, putting
everything else aside and
shutting the night's light out.

Dorothy Alves Holmes
A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Just Off The Top of My Head

1/12/15
12:21 a.m.

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Cindy
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Re: Painting By Moonlight

Postby Cindy » Tue Jan 13, 2015 3:58 pm

I love how you describe painting here. So sensuous and intimate.

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Stella
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Re: Painting By Moonlight

Postby Stella » Wed Jan 14, 2015 11:44 am

So beautiful Dorothy..a tender and loving portrait

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denysruak
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Re: Painting By Moonlight

Postby denysruak » Wed Jan 14, 2015 1:52 pm

A palette of colourful words painted with love. Well done.

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Re: Painting By Moonlight

Postby Karin Anderson » Thu Jan 15, 2015 6:39 am

A delightful write with your artful creativity expressing gorgeous moonlight images thank you Dorothy.

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Tom Balch
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Re: Painting By Moonlight

Postby Tom Balch » Thu Jan 22, 2015 1:44 pm

A beautiful poem/painting , Dotothy. Loved it.

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Re: Painting By Moonlight

Postby Nishu » Thu Jan 22, 2015 3:49 pm

Beautiful, worth many sighs dear Dorothy x


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