in just such a moment

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Nightmute
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in just such a moment

Postby Nightmute » Wed Jan 14, 2015 5:02 pm




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Reflections of mine upon first seeing my
wife almost 30 years ago, and knowing
that it was she who owned my heart
from that very first moment.
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a peekaboo moment presents itself,
and awash with wonder, i gloriously ascend
with eyes uplifted and heart unfettered,
filled to brimming with the anticipation of you.

carousing amidst the white-washed columns and pillars,
you, with your quirky way of smiling, capture my eye,
unleash upon me that galvanizing gaze that sets
this heart to beating, pounding, racing, galloping headlong
into triumphant thoughts of holding you within my arms.

my soul flies skyward while lips
take a decidedly upward turn, my Love.

i hurry on, not sure if the moment is right,
if the moment is upon us to meet and to sing
with joyous voice at the culminating feelings
set down on paper within my surging heart.

is this the time to take you within my arms, my Love?

the scrutiny of your eye starts shivers down my arms,
my legs, my stomach flutters, and my innards are in turmoil.
is this the moment, then, when rushing winds of ascendant joy
are meant to be winged upon, ridden, and to your side i should fly?

oh currents of heated air that catch at me, tear at me,
push at me to fly, to fly to none other than you!

this is the moment, aye.
this is the time for us, my Love.

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Re: in just such a moment

Postby Stella » Wed Jan 14, 2015 9:56 pm

A wonderful time Richard, that first kiss, you will always remember.
The first time you held her in your arms after all the longing was tearing away at your heart, and the culmination that created a love to last a lifetime, beautiful my friend.. beautiful ♫

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Karin Anderson
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Re: in just such a moment

Postby Karin Anderson » Thu Jan 15, 2015 11:18 am

Thank you for sharing the precious time when you saw your wife and I love the music and felt the quirkiness you speak of. Also the poem looks wonderful centered with the video. The romance and passion you share is breathtakingly beautiful and I admire how you do not take your wife for granted, as you absolutely adore her and no doubt she adores you too! Your writing blows me away as you images fly towards the conclusion of a unforgettable write thank you Richard.

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Wordsmith
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Re: in just such a moment

Postby Wordsmith » Thu Jan 15, 2015 12:22 pm

Lovely

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Cindy
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Re: in just such a moment

Postby Cindy » Thu Jan 15, 2015 7:27 pm

What a beautiful poem about one of your most treasured memories - the moment you first laid eyes on your wife. You're so good at writing such sentiments. I'm sure your wife treasures every word.

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Joseph Anderson
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Re: in just such a moment

Postby Joseph Anderson » Sat Jan 17, 2015 6:55 pm

A memorable poem, written from your heart.Your wife most surely will enjoy and appreciate this moving write, filled with great devotion.Done well,
my friend

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Re: in just such a moment

Postby Tom Balch » Thu Jan 22, 2015 1:47 pm

A perfect title for this spacial moment, Richard. Loved it my friend.


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