Yaks (alliterative Aruaku)

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denysruak
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Yaks (alliterative Aruaku)

Postby denysruak » Thu Jan 15, 2015 8:34 pm

Yaks (alliterative Aruaku)

Youthful, yeasty yaks'
yakety-yak yielded yawns -
from yesteryear yaks.

(C) Denys Ruak 2014
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Last edited by denysruak on Sun May 03, 2015 8:06 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Cindy
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Re: Yaks (alliterative Aruaku)

Postby Cindy » Thu Jan 15, 2015 11:44 pm

Can you say that three times real fast? Lol

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Karin Anderson
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Re: Yaks (alliterative Aruaku)

Postby Karin Anderson » Fri Jan 16, 2015 5:00 am

I could see there is more to this than first meets the eye, so I sticky beaked and checked it out on the internet and used both eyes. So I now know it is cleverly crafted, especially using the word "yak". I don't want to yak on too much but I love the inventiveness of the form and humor too Denys!

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Re: Yaks (alliterative Aruaku)

Postby Stella » Fri Jan 16, 2015 10:04 am

Lots of fun Denys.. i enjoyed your own form,

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Re: Yaks (alliterative Aruaku)

Postby Tom Balch » Thu Jan 22, 2015 1:53 pm

Ha-ha! Well done, great fun.


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