A Heartbeat Away

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Nishu
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A Heartbeat Away

Postby Nishu » Thu Jan 22, 2015 3:55 pm

As you sleep, I watch over you,
I see you quietly smile,
In bliss in a world of your own,
Cushioned from life's trials.
Wrapped in warm dreams content
I can only pray,
May the sun shine on you,
Brightening, lighting the way.

Forever in my heart I know, 
I'll hold you close to me, 
Bubble wrap you fine and tight,
For most special, precious you be.
The joys of life be always yours,
Smile night and day,
But should you ever need me my love,
I'm just a heartbeat away.

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Stella
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Re: A Heartbeat Away

Postby Stella » Thu Jan 22, 2015 4:55 pm

A beautiful sentiment Nishu, and as i read your words i realized that this lovely poem could be for a loved one or a child.

A heartbeat away is the closest love..

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Sandra Martyres
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Re: A Heartbeat Away

Postby Sandra Martyres » Thu Jan 22, 2015 6:09 pm

Such a beautiful poem Nishu....loved the closing line...I'm just a heartbeat away.

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Nightmute
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Re: A Heartbeat Away

Postby Nightmute » Thu Jan 22, 2015 7:47 pm

A comforting and touching write, Nishu. Just knowing that another has your best interest at heart and is always available gives a person a warm and secure feeling.

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Tom Balch
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Re: A Heartbeat Away

Postby Tom Balch » Thu Jan 22, 2015 8:37 pm

A beautifully penned poem, Nishu. Much enjoyed.

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Karin Anderson
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Re: A Heartbeat Away

Postby Karin Anderson » Fri Jan 23, 2015 5:51 am

How gorgeous this is and a delight and pleasure to read. I feel the warmth and preciousness of the poem and the concluding sentence is really beautiful thank you Nishu.

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Joseph Anderson
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Re: A Heartbeat Away

Postby Joseph Anderson » Fri Jan 23, 2015 3:21 pm

Nishu-whomever stands a heartbeat away from your love is a very lucky being.A heartfelt,poignant and touching poem of undying love.A great
depth of feeling


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