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A Heartbeat Away

Posted: Thu Jan 22, 2015 3:55 pm
by Nishu
As you sleep, I watch over you,
I see you quietly smile,
In bliss in a world of your own,
Cushioned from life's trials.
Wrapped in warm dreams content
I can only pray,
May the sun shine on you,
Brightening, lighting the way.

Forever in my heart I know, 
I'll hold you close to me, 
Bubble wrap you fine and tight,
For most special, precious you be.
The joys of life be always yours,
Smile night and day,
But should you ever need me my love,
I'm just a heartbeat away.

Re: A Heartbeat Away

Posted: Thu Jan 22, 2015 4:55 pm
by Stella
A beautiful sentiment Nishu, and as i read your words i realized that this lovely poem could be for a loved one or a child.

A heartbeat away is the closest love..

Re: A Heartbeat Away

Posted: Thu Jan 22, 2015 6:09 pm
by Sandra Martyres
Such a beautiful poem Nishu....loved the closing line...I'm just a heartbeat away.

Re: A Heartbeat Away

Posted: Thu Jan 22, 2015 7:47 pm
by Nightmute
A comforting and touching write, Nishu. Just knowing that another has your best interest at heart and is always available gives a person a warm and secure feeling.

Re: A Heartbeat Away

Posted: Thu Jan 22, 2015 8:37 pm
by Tom Balch
A beautifully penned poem, Nishu. Much enjoyed.

Re: A Heartbeat Away

Posted: Fri Jan 23, 2015 5:51 am
by Karin Anderson
How gorgeous this is and a delight and pleasure to read. I feel the warmth and preciousness of the poem and the concluding sentence is really beautiful thank you Nishu.

Re: A Heartbeat Away

Posted: Fri Jan 23, 2015 3:21 pm
by Joseph Anderson
Nishu-whomever stands a heartbeat away from your love is a very lucky being.A heartfelt,poignant and touching poem of undying love.A great
depth of feeling