You and I ~ a sonnet

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Stella
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You and I ~ a sonnet

Postby Stella » Sat Jan 24, 2015 4:58 pm

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I weave the silken threads of you and i
soft satin love bonds blend persuasion’s seam
with fragile fondness breathed upon a sigh
as true as sun splashed sparkles bless life’s stream

and from the spin of love lines on my loom
a prophecy, an ancient kiss is spun
to interlace and then to bring full bloom
amidst the lips of poets every one.

In whispers woven strands embrace the bond
twixt spinning wheel and those who weave with word
one voice, one soul, one precious love beyond
the song of sweet nirvana yet unheard.

Sublime the cloth of us lays velvet bound
and cradles cloaks in ling'ring love new found



© Stella Armour 23-01-15
Note: How to write a Sonnet is in the "How to" section.

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Karin Anderson
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Re: You and I ~ a sonnet

Postby Karin Anderson » Sun Jan 25, 2015 10:59 am

Such a glorious picture with sensational colours to accompany this superb Sonnet. Your Sonnet writing is second to none and this one has such a beautiful flow I kept going back to read it. One of your very best poems Stella!

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Re: You and I ~ a sonnet

Postby Tom Balch » Sun Jan 25, 2015 1:56 pm

What a beautiful opening line, Stella that draws the reader in and the end lines leave the reader wanting more. A wonderful sonnet to love.

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Re: You and I ~ a sonnet

Postby Joseph Anderson » Mon Jan 26, 2015 2:22 pm

Devine,delicate,delicious with many meaningful lines.A love sonnet in true form. A joy to read,especially aloud

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Re: You and I ~ a sonnet

Postby Seema Chowdhury » Mon Jan 26, 2015 6:30 pm

Lovely bond of love and care, nicely expressed.

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Re: You and I ~ a sonnet

Postby Nishu » Wed Jan 28, 2015 5:25 am

So romantic Stella, a glorious read :) dreamy !

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Re: You and I ~ a sonnet

Postby Sandra Martyres » Wed Jan 28, 2015 5:33 am

A romantic and beautifully crafted sonnet Stella!


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