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You and I ~ a sonnet
Posted: Sat Jan 24, 2015 4:58 pm
by Stella
I weave the silken threads of you and i
soft satin love bonds blend persuasion’s seam
with fragile fondness breathed upon a sigh
as true as sun splashed sparkles bless life’s stream
and from the spin of love lines on my loom
a prophecy, an ancient kiss is spun
to interlace and then to bring full bloom
amidst the lips of poets every one.
In whispers woven strands embrace the bond
twixt spinning wheel and those who weave with word
one voice, one soul, one precious love beyond
the song of sweet nirvana yet unheard.
Sublime the cloth of us lays velvet bound
and cradles cloaks in ling'ring love new found
© Stella Armour 23-01-15
Note: How to write a Sonnet is in the "How to" section.
Re: You and I ~ a sonnet
Posted: Sun Jan 25, 2015 10:59 am
by Karin Anderson
Such a glorious picture with sensational colours to accompany this superb Sonnet. Your Sonnet writing is second to none and this one has such a beautiful flow I kept going back to read it. One of your very best poems Stella!
Re: You and I ~ a sonnet
Posted: Sun Jan 25, 2015 1:56 pm
by Tom Balch
What a beautiful opening line, Stella that draws the reader in and the end lines leave the reader wanting more. A wonderful sonnet to love.
Re: You and I ~ a sonnet
Posted: Mon Jan 26, 2015 2:22 pm
by Joseph Anderson
Devine,delicate,delicious with many meaningful lines.A love sonnet in true form. A joy to read,especially aloud
Re: You and I ~ a sonnet
Posted: Mon Jan 26, 2015 6:30 pm
by Seema Chowdhury
Lovely bond of love and care, nicely expressed.
Re: You and I ~ a sonnet
Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2015 5:25 am
by Nishu
So romantic Stella, a glorious read
dreamy !
Re: You and I ~ a sonnet
Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2015 5:33 am
by Sandra Martyres
A romantic and beautifully crafted sonnet Stella!