Changing.

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Fay Slimm
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Changing.

Postby Fay Slimm » Sat Jan 24, 2015 10:37 pm

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Dappled sky,
white-ruffled and fluffed
like meringue pie
trapped in cold oven.

Streaked twilight
night-stained and greying
like unbaked rye
cake pierced by fine rain.

Wind-sheeted shore
wet-slaked and changing
like long-boiled water
means storm on the way.

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Stella
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Re: Changing.

Postby Stella » Sun Jan 25, 2015 11:22 am

if we looked up more often we would see some wonderful changes happening right through the day.

You have captured the changing hues of a stormy sky so well here Fay...

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Tom Balch
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Re: Changing.

Postby Tom Balch » Sun Jan 25, 2015 1:59 pm

The soul of the storm painted beautifully with your words, Fay.

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Seema Chowdhury
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Re: Changing.

Postby Seema Chowdhury » Mon Jan 26, 2015 6:34 pm

Storm on the way..... Yes beautifully composed, sounds very real


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