Yeah Right

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Tom Balch
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Yeah Right

Postby Tom Balch » Sat Jan 31, 2015 1:25 pm

The sun it shone a light so bright
down at Cape Cornwall next the sea
when out the water come a sight to fright
well I´ll tell you now it frightened me.
I was just a kid of eleven years
well ten and a half to be precise,
but I´ll not forget that thing I saw
it´ll probably haunt me all my life.
A giant hand of fifty feet
rose up from out the sea
moving sloooowly left annnnnd right
it was the biggest wave I ever see...

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Re: Yeah Right

Postby Stella » Sat Jan 31, 2015 1:36 pm

Oh goodness Tom, what a really scary thing to happen to a little boy, you must thought it was coming for you...bet you had nightmares for a long time after that.. ..aw bless.

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Re: Yeah Right

Postby Sandra Martyres » Tue Feb 03, 2015 4:41 am

A memorable sight dramatically presented....great poem Tom
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Re: Yeah Right

Postby Karin Anderson » Tue Feb 03, 2015 11:52 am

It must have been a massive freak wave, and I can understand how you would never forget it. I love how you tell the story as the little boy and you exaggerate your age and the giant hand and the title is so apt Tom.

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Re: Yeah Right

Postby Cindy » Tue Feb 03, 2015 11:48 pm

I think that would've haunted my dreams for a long time. You've described it quite well. :-)

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Re: Yeah Right

Postby Nishu » Wed Feb 04, 2015 1:59 pm

:) I enjoyed this, swept away by the words here.

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Re: Yeah Right

Postby Nightmute » Wed Feb 04, 2015 3:47 pm

Ha! A fun read, to be sure, Tom. Indeed, that has to be the biggest wave ever recorded, sir.

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Re: Yeah Right

Postby Seema Chowdhury » Sat Feb 07, 2015 10:03 pm

A delightful write.


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