Snowflakes ~ Alliterative Haiku

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Stella
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Snowflakes ~ Alliterative Haiku

Postby Stella » Sun Feb 01, 2015 1:35 pm

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Slow serene snowflakes
swirl silently shimmering
softly seductive



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Re: Snowflakes ~ Alliterative Haiku

Postby Karin Anderson » Mon Feb 02, 2015 7:10 am

So quiet and delicate I feel like whispering "Shh let's tiptoe to Stella's alliterative haiku and step into the picture and feel beautiful snowflakes all around us swirl and shimmer." Because this is how your lovely poetry affects me Stella...

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Re: Snowflakes ~ Alliterative Haiku

Postby Sandra Martyres » Mon Feb 02, 2015 11:04 am

You paint a beautiful picture in just three lines... Beautifully said Stella

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Re: Snowflakes ~ Alliterative Haiku

Postby Fay Slimm » Wed Feb 04, 2015 10:27 pm

Perfectly described vision of gentle snowfall. A lovely read Stella.

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Re: Snowflakes ~ Alliterative Haiku

Postby denysruak » Thu Feb 05, 2015 5:04 pm

You have it in a nutshell, Stella. Or should I say a snowflake? So grand.

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Re: Snowflakes ~ Alliterative Haiku

Postby denysruak » Sat Feb 07, 2015 2:25 pm

Snow scenario,/ sketched in such stunning style -/ Supreme script, Stella!.

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Re: Snowflakes ~ Alliterative Haiku

Postby apoetwholovestosing » Sat Feb 07, 2015 7:48 pm

Absolutely beautiful! Your pallet, your heart speaks!
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Re: Snowflakes ~ Alliterative Haiku

Postby Seema Chowdhury » Sat Feb 07, 2015 9:47 pm

Beautiful, we are also enjoying a lot of snowfall here in Canada.


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