Our Moonstruck Dreamscape

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Karin Anderson
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Our Moonstruck Dreamscape

Postby Karin Anderson » Thu Feb 05, 2015 12:03 pm




Video – “Dreamers” By Giovanni Marradi



(Compound Word Verse)

Swoon us to Strawberry Moon's song
as wild red pumps our hearts along
with moonrise.


Come fill our feelings with moon’s gold,
linger and cling as we behold
our moonscape.


String my necklace with milk moonstones
as your fingers slip to our groans
of moonquake.


Drool pools full of our glossed moon glows,
we'll slow sponge froth from head to toes
at moonset.


Snip exquisite silk of moon’s curves
and dream-dress me as we observe
we’re moonstruck!


Karin Anderson © 2013

(Compound Word Verse in the "How To" Section)

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Stella
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Re: Our Moonstruck Dreamscape

Postby Stella » Thu Feb 05, 2015 3:38 pm

So beautiful, and beautiful again Karin.

The combination of your sensual words and most dreamy music are too gorgeous for words..and what an exquisite form you have chosen to use.. delightful my friend.

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Sandra Martyres
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Re: Our Moonstruck Dreamscape

Postby Sandra Martyres » Sat Feb 07, 2015 10:12 am

Your imagery is amazing and the accompanying video is perfect. TFS karin

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Re: Our Moonstruck Dreamscape

Postby Seema Chowdhury » Sat Feb 07, 2015 9:51 pm

very pictorial write. nice video to complement your words.

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Re: Our Moonstruck Dreamscape

Postby apoetwholovestosing » Sun Feb 08, 2015 5:51 am

So divine Karin! Angels must smile at the tender beauty in the words you weave when you write a poem. You mellow the heart, allowing it to taste the sweetness in every line as well as hear passion's soft melodies.

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ken.brandli
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Re: Our Moonstruck Dreamscape

Postby ken.brandli » Sun Feb 08, 2015 7:50 am

Excellent....and I have learnt an interesting new form! Love the lunar wordscape you produce!

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Tom Balch
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Re: Our Moonstruck Dreamscape

Postby Tom Balch » Sun Feb 08, 2015 9:55 am

And I´m sruck with this beautiful poem, Karin. Thank you for sharing.

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Re: Our Moonstruck Dreamscape

Postby Tom Balch » Sun Feb 08, 2015 9:55 am

Struck! even.

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Joseph Anderson
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Re: Our Moonstruck Dreamscape

Postby Joseph Anderson » Mon Feb 09, 2015 3:38 pm

A heavenly or ethereal presentation in a very unigue way.Your many forms of writing just sends me-marvelous

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Re: Our Moonstruck Dreamscape

Postby Nightmute » Mon Feb 09, 2015 11:19 pm

Exquisite flow, so delicately laid out in stunning verse, Karin. A true treasure to read and feel, Ma'am.


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