A Wintry Night

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Stella
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A Wintry Night

Postby Stella » Thu Feb 05, 2015 2:35 pm

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He watched the willow tree dancing
in the evening breeze whilst listening to the garden
chimes as they tinkled a pretty and playful tune.

The snowdrops were barely breaking through
the frozen ground but still they could be seen,
and the sparrows all hiding in the warmth
under the eaves of the houses were sleepy

He noticed that the snow was still crisp
and the moon shone rays
of magical crystals upon it that dazzled
like the facets of a million tiny diamonds.

The night air was cold outside, and the sky
no longer white with its wintry burden
had become an indigo delight
from which he spied a myriad of
spangled stars shining down.

There was a stillness when the breeze slept
and the silvery chimes became silent.
Just a small very quiet rustle was heard
when a tiny mouse peeped out
from a hole in the wall, rubbed his little face
and twitched his whiskers in the moonlight


©Stella Armour2011-01-12

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Joseph Anderson
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Re: A Wintry Night

Postby Joseph Anderson » Thu Feb 05, 2015 11:10 pm

Stella-you sure made a wintry night into a thing of near mystical beauty.A remarkable job using imagery for effective polish..It created a feeling
of cosy serenity-great, as usual

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Re: A Wintry Night

Postby Karin Anderson » Fri Feb 06, 2015 9:05 pm

This is descriptive writing at its beautiful best and makes for a wonderful poetry presentation indeed. I simply adore the last stanza and the dear little mouse will remain in my heart and spirit for a long time Stella.

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Re: A Wintry Night

Postby Cindy » Fri Feb 06, 2015 9:33 pm

This is a beautiful poem. Everything's described so vividly. And then you planted a little mouse at the end. It's so adorable. I love it.

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Re: A Wintry Night

Postby Sandra Martyres » Sat Feb 07, 2015 10:08 am

Like the way you end this delighful poem Stella.. Your imagery throughout is par excellence


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