Haiku Trio Rear Window Collage

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apoetwholovestosing
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Haiku Trio Rear Window Collage

Postby apoetwholovestosing » Sun Feb 08, 2015 4:50 am

it was in the rear view window
I saw sunset, brilliant in
God's western sky,

pink- gold horizons
inviting my eyes to feast on
mosaic wonders

we headed east where
we would await a welcomed
sunrise whispering

Dorothy Alves Holmes
A Poet Who Loves To Sing

written on a return ride home
Feb. 7, 2015
5:40 p.m.

Dorothy Alves Holmes
APWLTS

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Re: Haiku Trio Rear Window Collage

Postby ken.brandli » Sun Feb 08, 2015 8:17 am

Pretty work Dorothy. I love the way haiku can convey the moment.

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Re: Haiku Trio Rear Window Collage

Postby Tom Balch » Sun Feb 08, 2015 9:53 am

Three beautiful stanzas to start the day with, Dorothy.

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Re: Haiku Trio Rear Window Collage

Postby Karin Anderson » Sun Feb 08, 2015 11:49 am

A perfect beginning of a new day where you appreciate God's gift of a sunset. Beautiful imagery as always Dorothy and thank you for sharing...

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Re: Haiku Trio Rear Window Collage

Postby Stella » Sun Feb 08, 2015 5:10 pm

A truly lovely collage you have created here Dorothy, ..


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