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Grey outside (haiku)
Posted: Sun Feb 08, 2015 8:56 am
by ken.brandli
under leaden skies
we drive through rain showers
my daughter laughing
Poem © K R Brandli 04/20/2012
Re: Grey outside (haiku)
Posted: Sun Feb 08, 2015 9:51 am
by Tom Balch
A beautiful image you paint.
Re: Grey outside (haiku)
Posted: Sun Feb 08, 2015 11:56 am
by Karin Anderson
A delightful haiku and I agree with Tom as it is picturesque and "my daughter laughing" really did it for me thank you Ken. Welcome to Stella's site and thank you for sharing.
Re: Grey outside (haiku)
Posted: Sun Feb 08, 2015 12:02 pm
by Sandra Martyres
An excellent haiku...always a pleasure to read your haiku poems. Great to see you posting here
Re: Grey outside (haiku)
Posted: Sun Feb 08, 2015 1:22 pm
by denysruak
..... and what a delight it is to drive through rain showers with your daughter appreciating the experience. I am surprised you even noticed the "grey outside" when there's such merriment around. Welcome to Stella's site, Ken - great to see you posting here.
Re: Grey outside (haiku)
Posted: Sun Feb 08, 2015 1:25 pm
by Cindy
I love this little picture of everyday life.
Re: Grey outside (haiku)
Posted: Sun Feb 08, 2015 4:43 pm
by Joseph Anderson
I marvel at the image you have created with just eleven words. Great concentration.I oft have wished to write in this form, but can not seem to
do it.Remarkable penning
Re: Grey outside (haiku)
Posted: Sun Feb 08, 2015 5:29 pm
by Stella
Welcome Ken, it is such a pleasure to see you here with friends old and new.
A lovely haiku for your first post.. hope there will be many more to come..
Re: Grey outside (haiku)
Posted: Thu Feb 12, 2015 6:43 pm
by Nightmute
How a child's laughter can utterly negate the melancholia that seeks to envelop us, Ken. A brilliant haiku!
Re: Grey outside (haiku)
Posted: Sat Feb 14, 2015 11:32 am
by ken.brandli
Thank you all for the comments. I have to say this one is a favourite of mine and that is why I chose it to open start my posts on the site. (It's probably all down hill from here....lol). I am touched by the overwhelming welcome. Thanks to all!!