Modern haiku - Fall

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Sandra Martyres
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Modern haiku - Fall

Postby Sandra Martyres » Thu Oct 30, 2014 9:07 am

windfall:
coloured confetti
for the autumn bride

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Stella
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Re: Modern haiku - Fall

Postby Stella » Thu Oct 30, 2014 10:37 am

A beautiful modern haiku Sandra... and a lovely image it conjures up too.... :) :)

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Fay Slimm
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Re: Modern haiku - Fall

Postby Fay Slimm » Thu Oct 30, 2014 10:59 am

So good to see you posting here in this comfortable4 and friendly new site dear Sandra - I love the way this haiku captures that special moment so clearly in Fall.

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Nishu
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Re: Modern haiku - Fall

Postby Nishu » Thu Oct 30, 2014 12:56 pm

Lovely haiku Sandra.. Delicate and pleasant,

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Re: Modern haiku - Fall

Postby Karin Anderson » Fri Oct 31, 2014 9:49 am

A delight write using the brevity of a modern haiku, I can visualize it all in my mind's eye and it is really beautiful Sandra.


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