On Experiencing Kindness for the First Time

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Tom Balch
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On Experiencing Kindness for the First Time

Postby Tom Balch » Mon Feb 09, 2015 1:28 pm


It was not the screaming
or the rage that
brought the tears,

the constant goading
and the insults
only fell on
deafened ears,

for pain and suffering
was the norm
living with
the constant scorn.

It was the kindness
in the words
of caring strangers
not to fear,

softly spoken
gentle words
that caused the sobbing
and the tears...

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Re: On Experiencing Kindness for the First Time

Postby Stella » Mon Feb 09, 2015 2:12 pm

Beautifully written Tom,
a little kindness from a stranger can mean so much... a relief from all the anxiety and pent up emotions coming as tears that help healing as the floodgates finally open.

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Re: On Experiencing Kindness for the First Time

Postby Joseph Anderson » Mon Feb 09, 2015 11:05 pm

Tom-this was very moving for me as I was brought up under similiar circumstances You captured the hurt with poignancy.A sad and memorable
write.Hopefully ,this will ease any ligering hurt

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Re: On Experiencing Kindness for the First Time

Postby Karin Anderson » Tue Feb 10, 2015 9:16 pm

A really thoughtful and tender write Tom as the kindness from strangers, can turn the bullied person's life around to hope. The sobbing and the tears are the welcome solace from the hurtful pain, as tears may heal a tortured soul.


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