Blowing Kisses (a senryu)

[Stella]

Were a tune a kiss
I’d play you a symphony
on the evening breeze
~

[Nightmute]

Nice! How lovely this is, Stella, and the feeling of bliss and joy you convey is utterly fantastic, Ma'am.

[Fay Slimm]

A beautiful Senryu for Valentine's Day Stella - - and I love the picture you chose to go with it.

[ken.brandli]

Gorgeous Stella! I love the sense switching concept and romance of the first two lines and then the unexpected but very clever melding of romance and nature in the last line. Can almost hear the music floating on the breeze. And then there is the lovely, and very apt image... Very well done.

[Karin Anderson]

A gorgeous presentation for Valentine's Day. The picture with red rose petals and the violin, sets your theme off wonderfully Stella.

[Joseph Anderson]

Stella-oft times the greatest beauty comes in the smallest package. This is definitely a full carat.Sweet memories for me, in this rare gem

[Sandra Martyres]

The perfect Valentine's Day senryu!

[Cindy]

I love this!

[Seema Chowdhury]

Beautiful

[antoine]

A whole symphony of kisses. That would be divine. No sharps or flats just full of the top notes of love.
Great senryu Stella

[antoine]

A whole symphony of kisses. That would be divine. No sharps or flats just full of the top notes of love.
Great senryu Stella

[Tom Balch]

Stella, Stella, Stella, thank you for this beautiful sweet poem that you have penned perfectly.

[eleanor prince]

Seamless - delightful!