Valentine Dreams.

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Fay Slimm
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Valentine Dreams.

Postby Fay Slimm » Sat Feb 14, 2015 11:16 am

Image



Clear
reason remonstrates with romantic
wishes that for years lay soaked 'neath
undeclared Valentine dreams.
Now
eyes shine limpid like dew-washed
sapphires when romance aspires to
step in and bridge the breach.
Bold
words assemble, roped by wishful
poetic hope that such confession
may help a Someone to guess
Who
writes this passionate verse which
contains desire no longer denied
and love no more suppressed.

So Please
be mine and make Paradise glow
with Valentine vows of devotion.

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ken.brandli
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Re: Valentine Dreams.

Postby ken.brandli » Sat Feb 14, 2015 11:38 am

Awwww......perfect for Valentine's Day and the image is great too. Good one, Fay.

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Stella
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Re: Valentine Dreams.

Postby Stella » Sat Feb 14, 2015 9:32 pm

A lovely plea for a valentine lover to show his undying devotion, and the alliteration works really well Fay....

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Karin Anderson
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Re: Valentine Dreams.

Postby Karin Anderson » Sun Feb 15, 2015 4:48 am

A stunning photo and, as Ken comments, this is perfect for Valentine's Day. Your final stanza is my favorite Fay.

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Seema Chowdhury
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Re: Valentine Dreams.

Postby Seema Chowdhury » Fri Mar 06, 2015 10:40 pm

beautiful

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stevenstirk
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Re: Valentine Dreams.

Postby stevenstirk » Sun Mar 15, 2015 2:05 pm

A beautiful picture and an even more beautiful poem.


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