Back Tracking To Your Love

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apoetwholovestosing
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Back Tracking To Your Love

Postby apoetwholovestosing » Sun Feb 15, 2015 2:40 am

I ran back again,
To gather your missing kisses, as
Suddenly the memory, wrapped
In your arms, you holding me so
Close, came like a dust storm,
Blinding my once seeing eyes.
I stumbled on, to search for you,
Becoming trapped in the folds of a
Tapestry, woven of what I wanted,
Not what I needed;
Still, I ran on.

Dorothy Alves Holmes
A Poet Who Loves To Sing

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Karin Anderson
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Re: Back Tracking To Your Love

Postby Karin Anderson » Sun Feb 15, 2015 4:31 am

Brilliant poem and imagery, and that memory sure came to life but allowed you to not become trapped in the folds of tapestry. One of your best Dorothy.

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Stella
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Re: Back Tracking To Your Love

Postby Stella » Sun Feb 15, 2015 10:47 pm

it would be wonderful indeed if we could backtrack Dorothy..

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Re: Back Tracking To Your Love

Postby Cindy » Mon Feb 16, 2015 10:38 pm

This is very moving. Very vivid imagery.


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