Valentine's Day At Strawberry Fair

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Karin Anderson
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Valentine's Day At Strawberry Fair

Postby Karin Anderson » Sun Feb 15, 2015 5:19 am

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(A Villanelle)

One Valentine’s Day she skips to Strawberry Fair.
Whirly winds whisk her skirt with a shapely leg view.
Crimson blush of maid who weds with tumbling hair.

Her see through whirligig skirt swishes wishes where
Birds trill and tremble trees to stir wings in morn’s dew.
One Valentine’s Day she skips to Strawberry Fair.

Her flushed basket of strawberries excites the air.
Doves chorus fervent calls and fetch tit bits to coo.
Crimson blush of maid who weds with tumbling hair.

Deep down, way in her heart she craves for his affair
And recalls last year her skirt was transparent too!
One Valentine’s Day she skips to Strawberry Fair.

He tickles her and feels up her legs for a dare.
He wins her a baby doll and knows what to do.
Crimson blush of maid who weds with tumbling hair.

Drooling he shares “I love you and your scented hair
We’ll ferris wheel elope and take off your skirt too!”
One Valentine’s Day she skips to Strawberry Fair.
Crimson blush of maid who weds with tumbling hair.



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Sandra Martyres
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Re: Valentine's Day At Strawberry Fair

Postby Sandra Martyres » Sun Feb 15, 2015 11:35 am

A fun write to celebrate Valentine's Day... Loved the way you rhymed it too! Happy Valentine's Day to you Karin dear...

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Joseph Anderson
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Re: Valentine's Day At Strawberry Fair

Postby Joseph Anderson » Sun Feb 15, 2015 3:15 pm

Romance and sensuality as lush as those red,ripe strawberries.Written in your usual, unusual way,but a beauty. Ah ,romance,I still remember

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Re: Valentine's Day At Strawberry Fair

Postby Stella » Sun Feb 15, 2015 10:46 pm

A little naughty and a little sensual, but why not ?

I would love to go to Strawberrry Fair with my Valentine, and the villanelle form suits this light hearted poem beautifully Karin.

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Fay Slimm
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Re: Valentine's Day At Strawberry Fair

Postby Fay Slimm » Sun Feb 15, 2015 11:00 pm

I love the flow of pure sensuality in this lovely Valentine verse Karin. -- such a pleasure to read your poetry.

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Re: Valentine's Day At Strawberry Fair

Postby Cindy » Mon Feb 16, 2015 11:27 pm

This was fun and a little daring. :-)

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Re: Valentine's Day At Strawberry Fair

Postby Tom Balch » Thu Feb 19, 2015 10:22 am

A fun filled sensual and very well crafted, Villanelle, Karin. Very much enjoyed.

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Re: Valentine's Day At Strawberry Fair

Postby Seema Chowdhury » Thu Feb 19, 2015 5:48 pm

A fun write Karin


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