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Valentine's Day At Strawberry Fair

Posted: Sun Feb 15, 2015 5:19 am
by Karin Anderson
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(A Villanelle)

One Valentine’s Day she skips to Strawberry Fair.
Whirly winds whisk her skirt with a shapely leg view.
Crimson blush of maid who weds with tumbling hair.

Her see through whirligig skirt swishes wishes where
Birds trill and tremble trees to stir wings in morn’s dew.
One Valentine’s Day she skips to Strawberry Fair.

Her flushed basket of strawberries excites the air.
Doves chorus fervent calls and fetch tit bits to coo.
Crimson blush of maid who weds with tumbling hair.

Deep down, way in her heart she craves for his affair
And recalls last year her skirt was transparent too!
One Valentine’s Day she skips to Strawberry Fair.

He tickles her and feels up her legs for a dare.
He wins her a baby doll and knows what to do.
Crimson blush of maid who weds with tumbling hair.

Drooling he shares “I love you and your scented hair
We’ll ferris wheel elope and take off your skirt too!”
One Valentine’s Day she skips to Strawberry Fair.
Crimson blush of maid who weds with tumbling hair.



Karin Anderson © 2011
All Rights Reserved~

Re: Valentine's Day At Strawberry Fair

Posted: Sun Feb 15, 2015 11:35 am
by Sandra Martyres
A fun write to celebrate Valentine's Day... Loved the way you rhymed it too! Happy Valentine's Day to you Karin dear...

Re: Valentine's Day At Strawberry Fair

Posted: Sun Feb 15, 2015 3:15 pm
by Joseph Anderson
Romance and sensuality as lush as those red,ripe strawberries.Written in your usual, unusual way,but a beauty. Ah ,romance,I still remember

Re: Valentine's Day At Strawberry Fair

Posted: Sun Feb 15, 2015 10:46 pm
by Stella
A little naughty and a little sensual, but why not ?

I would love to go to Strawberrry Fair with my Valentine, and the villanelle form suits this light hearted poem beautifully Karin.

Re: Valentine's Day At Strawberry Fair

Posted: Sun Feb 15, 2015 11:00 pm
by Fay Slimm
I love the flow of pure sensuality in this lovely Valentine verse Karin. -- such a pleasure to read your poetry.

Re: Valentine's Day At Strawberry Fair

Posted: Mon Feb 16, 2015 11:27 pm
by Cindy
This was fun and a little daring. :-)

Re: Valentine's Day At Strawberry Fair

Posted: Thu Feb 19, 2015 10:22 am
by Tom Balch
A fun filled sensual and very well crafted, Villanelle, Karin. Very much enjoyed.

Re: Valentine's Day At Strawberry Fair

Posted: Thu Feb 19, 2015 5:48 pm
by Seema Chowdhury
A fun write Karin